請問我這篇作文能拿到幾分 !? - 自學

在自學版也一陣子了

看過不少好文 還有一些寫作的心得文

小弟也寫了一篇作文 是為了要考研究所準備的

想請問這樣的格式或寫法

如果以滿分100的話 能拿到幾分

以下為作文文章

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English teaching and Internet


In recent years, learning English has become a new trend in Taiwan;
it could be said that it is a phenomenon of the times. Also, there are
numerous cram school of English teaching everywhere. Although it is very
convenient to learn English, these courses are costly. For this reason,
Internet plays an important roles in nowdays English teaching. There are also
many benefits from leanring English online such as convenience, flexible
courses,and the low price, some even free of charge.

To begin with, unlike traditional class, learners can learn English
online whenever they want, whatever they like, and wherever they will be
as long as they have a computer wired. Learners don't have to go ouside for
a class instead of having a cup of coffee and can have a cozy and relaxing
English learning online at home. When it come to convenience, nothing can
compare with Internet.

In addition to the convenience of learning English online, it can
provide flexible and a variety of courses such as online tutors, grammar
explanation, and literature correction. Moreover, the courses are very
flexible beyond your imagination. For example, learners can have a game
with English learning which enable learners to learn from games. Hence, This
kind of activity is both entertaining and informative.Indeed,by choosing topics
that interest learners in the language, they can achieve remarkable results.

Furthermore, learning English online can eliminate learners'
tension and provide an environment in which the anxiety from learners will
be disburden. Using Internet, learners don't have to face teachers or any
one else online.

As the teaching methods have come and gone, so have English teaching
trends waxed and waned in popularity. On other words, time changes and the
way of teaching should keep up with the times. Consequently, we need to
figure out the best way to learn English to serve the purpose.

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感謝你的閱讀 ^_^

也許寫的不是很好

但我也想快點進步 ><


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