有一題口說... - 英檢

本篇回答結構Good

先開宗明義給一個答案 "portrait"

再給原因，然後敘述細節

只是有一些文法用字和時態需修改一下

※ 引述《think12381 ()》之銘言：
: ※ 引述《paupaulon (prepare for..)》之銘言：
: : describe a piece of arts that is imporant to you.
: : 很抱歉~~ 我實在想不出來了
: : 希望可以有人幫我一下! :(
: : 感激不盡!!
: 我想我會這樣回答

: The most important art is the portrait that is created by my mother.
^^^^^ ^^
piece of art (因art不可數) was


: It is important for me because that is my birthday present at 18.
^^
was


: The portrait depicts my father. He is a honor, courageous person.
^^^^^^^
an honorable


: For one thing, my mother told me.
: when my farther was child, he picked up a bag including much money.
^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
a child found which contained a lot of


: He send the bag to police office. he is so honor.
^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^
took the police office was so honorable (honest可能更好)


: For another thing,
: when he was youth, he saw a man who was so strong kicking his friend.
^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
young a very strong man who was


: He stopped the man's behavior.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ (字彙搭配問題，behavior前不會接stop)
stood up against the man and told him to stop doing that.


: He is courageous because he is so thin.
^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^
was even though he was


: For these reasons, The portrait symbolizes honor and courage.
: That's why the portrait is important for me.

: 11句 時間內應該講的完 不然可以在刪個幾句
: 這樣答的好處 剛好和
: Describe the characteristics of a good teacher. Please state with specific
: examples and details.
: Who is the person you admire the most? Please give specific details and
: examples in your explanation.
: 可以共用一個答案
: 有錯請指教摟

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