急~~請幫我修改翻譯哪裡錯了(二十點) - 生活

Enid avatar
By Enid
at 2006-03-05T00:00

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今年的寒假過的並不充實,幾乎有一半的時間都在家裡渡過。偶爾出去逛逛市區,或沈溺在遊戲的世界裡。雖然過年期間領了不少紅包。但是,卻因為車禍花了七百元修理機車。而在這寒假唯一的樂趣只有看了幾部韓國電影讓我印象深刻,像是A moment to remember是部讓我很感動的愛情片,另外還有幾部恐怖片,不過卻嚇不著我。在台灣的最後幾天,都是我的遊戲時間了,至少我不會再出車禍。我也找了以前的高中同學去吃了一頓大餐,順便去逛逛市區,雖然沒看到著名的台南燈會,但是明年我一定會去。最後,這次的寒假雖然普通,但是卻讓我暫時回到以往都市的生活,也算是為這一年稍作休息。
The winter vacation of this year leads of not substantial, almost have half of time all to pass through at home.Occasionally go out to take a walk the downtown, or 溺 is in the world of the game.Although the period of New Year\'s Day got a few red envelopes.But, because the traffic accident spent 700 dollars to fix the motorcycle.And only saw a few Korean movies make my impression deep in this winter vacation only fun, seem the A moment to remember is a love slice that lets me move, besides still have a few terrible slices, however can not frighten me.The last days in Taiwan was all my game time, I will not have an car accident again at least.I also found the senior high school classmate of the past to have the at one feed dinner, conveniently taking a walk the downtown, although didn\'t see the light meeting in well-known Tainan, next year I is certainly meeting.End, this winter vacation although commonness, let me temporarily return to before citied life, also at last slightly make the rest for this year.
以上是用翻譯軟體翻的,不過我又將它翻一次中文卻翻的亂七八糟,請各位可以幫我看看嗎??

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Eartha avatar
By Eartha
at 2006-03-07T20:41
這句almost have half of time all to pass through at home我建議你改成>>turns out I have to spend half of them at home.Occasionally go out to take a walk the downtownMaybe take a walk downtown once in a while因為你原本的結構順序有點不太對啦^^"我那樣翻比較大眾化一點Although the period of New Year's Day got a few red envelopes.But, because the traffic accident spent 700 dollars to fix the motorcycle.Although I got a few red envelops during New Years, but it costs me 700 dollars to fix the broken motorcycle on that traffic accident.你前面有個although 後面沒有結局就直接逗點了...??這裡看得出翻譯機的斃命=  =他不了解涵義這樣直接翻是不行的And only saw a few Korean movies make my impression deep in this winter vacation only fun,The only thing that makes me feel like I'm on a vacation is that I watched some Korean movies, which impressed me a lot.這個翻譯機根本就在騙你T++T 不解釋了啦  他太誇張了下面是我直接照你寫的中文翻譯的The one "A moment to remeber" is a love film that really moved me, but those scary movies didn't even scared me at all. The last few days for me in Taiwan are my time for games, at least there's no more car accidents for me. I invited my old high school mates for a big meal, we also take a walk in the city area. We didn't see the famus Lantern Festival, but I'm sure I WILL next year. The winter vacation is normal, although, but at least I had a great time back in my life in cities. Sort of a rest.
Hazel avatar
By Hazel
at 2006-03-08T08:19
I did not do anything meaningful in the winter vancation this year, as I stayed home most of the times. Once in a while I went out to have a walk in downtown, or I spent most of my time on the video games. Although I got quite a few "red pockets" during Chinese New Year, $700 was spent for fixing my motocycle due to the car accident I had had. The only thing I enjoyed doing during this winter vacation was the few Korean movies I watched, such as "A moment to remember" which was a very touching love story. There were also a few horror movies other than the touching stories that I watched, but they were not scary at all. The last few days in Taiwan was my fun time, at least, I would not have a car accident again. (其實我不太懂得“至少我不會再出車禍” 是什麼意思﹖) I have called my friends from senior highschool out for dinner and we went shopping at downtown. Although I didn't go to the well-known 台南燈會*, I'd definitely go there next year. This winter vacation was plain, but I enjoyed it because it made me feel like I went back in times when I used to live in the city. At least, I had a break away from the year-long work.
*台南燈會(抱歉咯﹐我不是台灣人﹐我不懂翻譯這個)
我要說的﹐請不要依賴網上的翻譯器。
它們翻譯的時候﹐根本沒有文法可言..
下次嘗試自己寫﹐否則很難會學好英文﹐
錯了不重要﹐最重要的是從犯錯的地方裡學習 :)
Doris avatar
By Doris
at 2006-03-08T16:27
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I did not have a substantial winter vacation this year, because I spent half of my vacation doing nothing but staying at home. But, I did go out for a walk in the downtown or abandoned myself to the TV games from time to time.
Although I got some pocket money from the red envelopes during the Chinese New Year, I paid NT700 dollars to have my motorcycle to be repaired due to a traffic accident.
The joyful activities impressed me were watched some Korean movies in this winter vacation. For example, “A moment to remember” was a very touching love story movie. And there were some horrible movies without frightening me.
I spent last several days in Taiwan with TV games; at least I did not need to worry about any accident I might have if I stayed in the house. I did visit some friends of my high school. We went out for a fine dinner and did some window shopping in the downtown. I missed the well-known Lantern Festival in Tainan this year, but, I am sure to see it again in the next year.
I don’t think it was a very special winter vacation for me this year. However, I did go back to the city life I used to have before. It is a kind of “resting” for me in the past year.
Ingrid avatar
By Ingrid
at 2006-03-09T12:55
I did not live my winter vacation to the fullest. Half of the time was spent staying at home. Now and then I was hanging around in downtown or indulge myself in playing(video) games.Although I got quite a number of red envelopes during the Chinese New Year; however, the car accident cost me 700 dollars for fixing the motorcycle.And the only thing worthwile I have done during the vacation was watching a few Korean movies. For example, " A Moment to Remember" is a romance that touched me. Besides I also watched other horror films, but none of them frightened me.The last few days in Taiwan was nothing but playing. At least I did not have any car car accident ever since.I also met some old classmates from senior high school and had dinner together. After that we took a look in the downtown. Although I missed the popular Lantern Festival in Tainan, I will certainly be there next year. To sum up, this winter vacation was not special though, I had a short time staying in the city where I used to be. It was a break away from the last busy year .
2006-03-05 14:59:22 補充:
1.第一, 二句可以連起來:I did not live my life in the winter vacation to the fullest because most of the time had been spent (on) staying at home.2. indulge => indulged 或是 indulging3. the only thing worthwile I have done during the vacation =>the only thing I felt worthwhile doing during the vacation

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