幫幫忙唷！把這邊短文翻英文！ - 過年

Have celebrated the New Year to, everybody should enclose the stove to take members a meal together, grandfather , grandmother , uncle , aunt .....Come back we house League members ¨Ë! Everybody and happy and happy and harmonious one enclose and have a meal in front of the dining table, very happy, good happiness. Have a meal, it is my most happy thing, because can get the covert payment . There is less covert payment taken this year, probably only more than 7,000. It is quite boring to celebrate the New Year this year ¨ÉSay , from the third day to the eighth day , stay at home, there is no thing to do, ultra and disagreeable. On short three weeks winter vacation, originally want to say that can have a good rest, it is false to put one, go out to play. But not all right without expecting the homework to really arrive more ! I think , it has been written with the homework that stay at home on whole winter vacation! Remember that has a headache!
I hope I can help you!!good luck!

上述兩篇至少有以下差異，比較看看吧!
所有格:our house 與we house
時態:Had a meal與Have a meal

Celebrate New Year's Eve, everyone wants to surround the stove to together have family reunion dinner, grandpa, grandmother, uncle, aunt.....All came back our house member the ㄋ !Everyone happy and harmoniously rounded to before dining table have a meal, very happy, good happiness.Had a meal, is my most happy matter, because can get the red envelope.The red envelope that take this year is less, probably only having 7,000 have another just.Celebrate New Year's Eve this year, also pretty what stuff the ㄉ to say, from beginning three go to the beginning eight, all has been staying at home, have no thing to do, super dislike.Very short three winter vacations of weeks, originally meaning to say can like the rest, putting a false, go out to play.But unexpectedly the homework is to much go to and don't go!I think ah, the winter vacation was whole to all want to stay at home to write the homework!Think of and then have a headache!
~不知是否正確~不好意思!