※ 引述《yanchloe (我想要吃冰)》之銘言：
: 這是寫作真經的參考範例，我對裡面的一些文法有疑問
: This is beause even being programmed to copy human creations,(要加that嗎)
: computers never produce their own unique msterpieces.
: 因為有開頭的this is，逗號後面不用加that來代表先行詞this is嗎?
這是分詞構句，原句寫成:This is because computers never produce their own
unique masterpieces, even though computers are programmed to copy human
creations. 前後兩句以even though連結的句子有相同的主詞-computers，所以可用
分詞構句的方式讓兩個句子變成一個，並省略連接詞。
: She points out that small businesses have a higher closure rate in their first
: five years, and thus in terms of job security,(沒有連接詞) working in large companies
: certainly overweioghs setting up a new business.
: 第二句有and ,而且又不是完整句子，所以第三句才不用連接詞嗎?
連接詞是用來連接了個句子，句子的必要組成是主詞、動詞。thus in terms of job
security中並沒有動詞，所以不算是個句子，當然也不用連接詞來連接。
從你的問題可以給你的建議是，先看懂句意，再去想文法，不要把文法直接套到句子裡，
因為語言是活的，一個意思可以有好幾種說法，複雜的不行就先從簡單的開始，熟練
就會進步了。
: Nevertheless, the professor clearly indicates that even though large companies
: may be reducing welfare offered to their employees, self-emplyers have to
: realize that as soon as they start their own businesses,(為什麼沒有連接詞) all
: benefits are dug out of their own profits.
: 另外，整合寫作的最後一段不用加conclusion嗎?
: 請各位高手解答，謝謝
印象中整合寫作是不要你發表自己意見的，結論多半是你自己的見解，盡量避免。
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: 這是寫作真經的參考範例，我對裡面的一些文法有疑問
: This is beause even being programmed to copy human creations,(要加that嗎)
: computers never produce their own unique msterpieces.
: 因為有開頭的this is，逗號後面不用加that來代表先行詞this is嗎?
這是分詞構句，原句寫成:This is because computers never produce their own
unique masterpieces, even though computers are programmed to copy human
creations. 前後兩句以even though連結的句子有相同的主詞-computers，所以可用
分詞構句的方式讓兩個句子變成一個，並省略連接詞。
: She points out that small businesses have a higher closure rate in their first
: five years, and thus in terms of job security,(沒有連接詞) working in large companies
: certainly overweioghs setting up a new business.
: 第二句有and ,而且又不是完整句子，所以第三句才不用連接詞嗎?
連接詞是用來連接了個句子，句子的必要組成是主詞、動詞。thus in terms of job
security中並沒有動詞，所以不算是個句子，當然也不用連接詞來連接。
從你的問題可以給你的建議是，先看懂句意，再去想文法，不要把文法直接套到句子裡，
因為語言是活的，一個意思可以有好幾種說法，複雜的不行就先從簡單的開始，熟練
就會進步了。
: Nevertheless, the professor clearly indicates that even though large companies
: may be reducing welfare offered to their employees, self-emplyers have to
: realize that as soon as they start their own businesses,(為什麼沒有連接詞) all
: benefits are dug out of their own profits.
: 另外，整合寫作的最後一段不用加conclusion嗎?
: 請各位高手解答，謝謝
印象中整合寫作是不要你發表自己意見的，結論多半是你自己的見解，盡量避免。
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