寫作要怎麼破20呢? - 英檢

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補上小弟的綜合寫作文章

考滿分TPO29
The professor and the article are both discussing the Edmontosaurus
migration hypothesis. However, the speaker on the lecture disagrees with the
ideas in the reading article for several reason. He believes that the
Edmontosaurus did not survived the winter by migrating south to more
hospitable regions.
The first reason why the professor disagrees with the reading is because of
the edmontosaurs's diet. Although the reading claims that the no plants could
grow during the cold and dark North Slope, the man says that the North Slope
was warmer in a million years ago. He also mentions that the sunlight was 24
hour per day. Therefore, the lecturer believes that edomontosaurs's diet did
not prove the migration hypothesis.
Second, the lecturer refutes the reading passage by mentioning the
edomontosaurs lived in herd. Though the article claims that the migratory
animals also live in herds, the man says that there was others reason lived
in herds. He also takes Lasaval Elck for example. Hence, the professor in the
lecture concludes that the edomontosaurs lived in herds do not means that the
migration hypothesis.
The third reason why the professor in the lecture disagrees with the
reading article is related ti the capable of migrating long distance. While
the reading holds that the edomontosaurs could run fast, the man mentions
that onlt the adult edomontosaurs had the locomotive power. He also notes
that the not adult edomontosaurs could slow the herd. Hence, the speaker in
the lecture concludes that the capable of migrating the long do not support
the migration hypothesis.
Finally the lecturer believes disagrees with the points in the reading. He
believes that Edmontosaurus did not survived the winter by migrating south to
more hospitable regions.

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All Comments

Leila avatarLeila2015-07-01
你的文法錯誤太多了 錯字也是 不要想拚字數 重點不在量
Dora avatarDora2015-07-04
而且可以看出你單字量十分不足 試著自己琢磨修改
Lucy avatarLucy2015-07-04
單字量是還好 只是代名詞的問題很大 我看得都很頭痛
Alought S+V, S+V. 這種句子的主詞請用同一性質的
George avatarGeorge2015-07-08
你的although第一句用article當主詞 第二句用man 超怪
Tom avatarTom2015-07-12
另外the man又是誰? 然後文法要再多加強...
Jake avatarJake2015-07-13
代名詞的問題有速解 作文中只用author跟lecturer就好 萬用!
其他professor什麼的都捨棄
Skylar Davis avatarSkylar Davis2015-07-15
文章中提到he/she時才能快速知道指向author或者lecture
Rachel avatarRachel2015-07-16
更正 lecture -> lecturer
我回一篇文好了
Regina avatarRegina2015-07-19
先不管單字量或語句複雜度 文法錯太多了
George avatarGeorge2015-07-23
我記得一篇錯超過5個文法錯誤就很難破20
Olivia avatarOlivia2015-07-23
可以花錢請人幫改呀,改個五篇應該提升會滿大的
Joseph avatarJoseph2015-07-27
請問高雄有哪裡可以請人改的呢?