請幫我修改訂正我的英文回信 - 過年

By Ophelia
at 2010-02-10T00:00

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這是我姑姑打給我的簡訊
和我自己的翻譯
不知道對不對 , 若有翻錯請告訴我
My dear little baby
我親愛的小寶貝
How about your vacation
你的假期過的如何呢?
Did you had calm down your heart and think : What you want to be
你有平靜你的心和思索未來該做什麼了嗎 ?
and try do your best to be that
接著嘗試去把它做到最好
I wish you happy and please :always remember even
我願你快樂還有請總是牢記 ????
we can not living together
我們雖然沒有住在一起
but my heart will always with you
但是我的心將總是跟著你
//: From your NO.1 Aunt
來自你的大姑姑
happy new year and missing you
新年快樂還有想念你
這是我的回信應該錯誤很多
打問號的是我真的不會翻譯了
然後句子有不順的請幫我修改訂正
新年快樂姑姑
Happy New Year aunt !
我在我的寒假裡過的很快樂也很充實
I ' am very happy and substantial in my winter vacation
我也有在思考和計畫我的未來
I am also think and plan my prospective
謝謝您的關心
thank your concerned
過年快到了
???????????????????
我希望家人可以團聚一起享受家庭盛宴
I want all the family can together and have a family feast
因為我們好久不見
because we are ??????????
抱歉 , 晚回了
sorry , I am late to write in reply .

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By George
at 2010-02-10T16:34

My dear little baby,
我親愛的小寶貝
How about your vacation？
你的假期過的如何呢?
Did you calm down and think about what you want to be
你有平靜你的心和思索未來該做什麼了嗎 ?
and try your best ?
接著嘗試去把它做到最好
I wish you happiness and please always remember
我願你快樂還有請總是牢記
even though we can not live together,
們雖然沒有住在一起
my heart will always be with you.
我的心將總是跟著你
From your elder aunt
來自你的大姑姑
Happy new year and I miss you.
年快樂還有想念你
新年快樂姑姑
Happy New Year, dear aunt.
寒假裡過的很快樂也很充實
I have a happy and substantial winter vacation.
也有在思考和計畫我的未來
I also think about and plan my future.
謝謝您的關心
Thank you for your concern.
我希望家人可以團聚一起享受家庭盛宴
I hope all the family can together and have a family feast
因為我們好久不見
because we haven't seen each other for a long time.
抱歉 , 晚回了
I'm sorry to reply late.

By Suhail Hany
at 2010-02-12T07:35

翻得不錯，沒有明顯的錯誤；回信修正如下：
新年快樂姑姑
Happy New Year aunt !
我在我的寒假裡過的很快樂也很充實
I am very happy and substantial in my winter vacation.
我也有在思考和計畫我的未來
I also think and plan my future.
謝謝您的關心
Thanks your concern.
過年快到了
Lunar New Year is coming soon.
我希望家人可以團聚一起享受家庭盛宴
I wish all the family can together and have a family feast.
因為我們好久不見
because I haven&#039;t seen you for a long time.
抱歉 , 晚回了
sorry , I write back lately.
2010-02-10 03:04:55 補充：
此句應是 Because I haven't seen you for a long time.
2010-02-10 03:07:25 補充：
我也有在思考和計畫我的未來
再次訂正 I also plan and think about my future.
2010-02-10 03:12:42 補充：
我希望家人可以團聚一起享受家庭盛宴
訂正為I wish all the family can get together and have a family feast.
(Because together this word is adj. or adv. .)
2010-02-10 05:07:48 補充：
我希望家人可以團聚一起享受家庭盛宴
(我剛剛看到一句很漂亮又很道地的用法)I wish all the family can have a great dinner together.

請幫我修改訂正我的英文回信 - 過年

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