請大家看看我的獨立寫作的模板適不適當! - 英檢

According to the passage, the author proposed several reasons on XXXXXX
However, the speaker in the lecture holds a totally opposite attitude to the
contents of passage. The following will show how they disagree on the issue.
First,
What's more,
In addition,
To sum up, the author holds complete confidence on XXXXXXXXXXXX
the speaker cast doubt on it based on the research she found on YYYYYYYY
They obviously have disagrements over the issue.

這是我三年前用的模板

不知道能否給我一些建議??

有沒有哪裡需要再做改進的???

謝謝



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