請大家看看我的獨立寫作的模板適不適當! - 英檢

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According to the passage, the author proposed several reasons on XXXXXX
However, the speaker in the lecture holds a totally opposite attitude to the
contents of passage. The following will show how they disagree on the issue.
First,
What's more,
In addition,
To sum up, the author holds complete confidence on XXXXXXXXXXXX
the speaker cast doubt on it based on the research she found on YYYYYYYY
They obviously have disagrements over the issue.

這是我三年前用的模板

不知道能否給我一些建議??

有沒有哪裡需要再做改進的???

謝謝



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All Comments

Linda avatarLinda2009-12-19
為什麼我怎麼看都覺得這像整合寫作模板?
Poppy avatarPoppy2009-12-20
如果以GMAT標準語法來看 第一句修辭不佳
Audriana avatarAudriana2009-12-23
According to 後面的S不能放人吧
沒記錯的話啦 因為很久以前考的了 有點忘了
Kama avatarKama2009-12-26
According to後接某個權威人士or資訊來源
Dora avatarDora2009-12-28
好像不能接"自己"的意見或想法
Kyle avatarKyle2009-12-29
這似乎是整合寫作的模板耶,你要再查清楚喔!
Belly avatarBelly2009-12-30
謝謝各位板友的建言~~~
Oscar avatarOscar2010-01-03
給個小意見 與其寫結論 不如把聽到敘述更詳細
Adele avatarAdele2010-01-07
推樓上,把聽與讀中給的點都寫出來比較,字數再衝多一點