請問這個文法正確嗎 - 英檢

正在寫TPO的整合題

每次寫都會有個小煩惱

就是不知道可不可以用連接詞一直接下去寫????

也就是Although第一句,第二句.thus making it.....

這樣可以嗎?????


我這樣寫文法會不會錯
Though,the article states that the talk took place years before Chevalier
wrote the memoir, making it impossible to remember every single world
precisely, the professor indicates that Chevalier had used to write journals
and notes, thus he can refer to the resources he had recorded several years
ago.


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