請問獨立寫作 - 英檢

請問各位版友
獨立寫作中的第二及第三段中，很多人都會放個人的例子
可是有的時候就是會想不到梗，有的時候我在做練習，想
梗就想半天了，所以如果我找不到自己親身的例子去支持
我的論點，我可不可以把自己的論點講的詳細一點呢?

以下是我自己寫的東西
當作這次我要表達的例子
由於我不太想用模板
所以最近嘗試自己以正常的撰文方式寫作文

題目:說實話或讓朋友犯錯：
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Letting a friend make a mistake is better than saying or doing something
which will destroy the friendship.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion




文章如下:
We all agree that having friends is one of the most important thing in our
life. Humanity builds our culture is basing on the good idea of cooperation.
However, in many situation, we might face a problem which is,if we have to
let a friend make a mistake or just telling,even if it breaks friendship? I
suppose it depends on the situation you face. For me, I choose to tell him(or
her). The reasons can be listed as following.

If the function of the friendship,to make him do right thing, is broken,it is
not so called friendship. I consider that a real friend has a responsibility
of showing the risk to his friend,a person who he real likes .I have a
friend, he always made trouble when we were studying in high school
.Moreover, studying was not an opinion of his high school plan .He always
asked me to play basketball in the class time .What could I do? I could play
with him and just let his poor grade unchanged, but I asked him to study with
me and push him into a university .I suppose that it is the so called
friendship.

Although you suppose your friend to do something and it might make your
relationship worsen .It is just a short time that you are facing, he will
understand what you do in the time he is confusing in the stream of his life
and he also appreciates the relationship between you and him. There are many
example in our life, a friend who will make a recommendation is a real
friend for you.

Finally,We all have to communicate with other people .That is why we always
making friend with other people .However, in these so many friends which we
still hold relationship, many of them might give us excellent recommendation
.When we make a mistake, they tell us to make the thing right. So,if you have
a friend who is making

老實說我打字並不快，到第三段開始時間已經用掉一大半以上了
所以我第三段來不及想梗，加上第二段想梗花了很多時間，由於
也不是真人真事，所以梗也滿爛的。

所以我想請問大家，舉一個親身的例子在獨立寫作的部分，是不是
對於分數的影響真的很大呢?



謝謝大家耐心看完我的文章


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