能幫我看看我的英文小作文嗎?? - 過年

By Hamiltion
at 2013-11-06T00:00

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我相信應該有很多地方的文法或時態是錯的，要麻煩前輩幫忙訂正了
The event that changed my life
My parent was divorced when i was child,It was big changed for my life.They always fight to each other in my memory,when my parent decided to divorce,i am very happy,even it is mean my father would not to take care us anymore.
Most people believe,if the child lives in single parent family,it is negative influence for their psychology health.It is totally wrong notion,in fact,it was make me happier because of my parent divorced,there are no fight in my family and our life back to normal,it is most important for everyone,at least,i can very proud to say:The warmness of my home,has not been short,and that is all i can tell you
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非常謝謝你，時態總是我最容易搞混的東西＠＠＂
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其實我老爸是真的沒給過什麼贍養費的
最近一兩年過年時倒是有給過我們紅包

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By Emily
at 2013-11-09T18:15

When I was a child my parents were divorced. It was a huge change in my life. They constantly fought as I recall. When they decide to get a divorce I was very happy, even though it meant my father would not support us any more.
Most people think in a single parent family the child will grow up with a negative mental health attitude. That is totally wrong. In fact it made me happier. There are no more fights in my home and our life is back to normal. I am proud to tell everyone that the warmth of my home did not diminish. That's all I want to say.
comments:
1. Use periods between sentences, not commas.
2. Skip a space after each comma or period.
3. Watch your tense, you switched from past tense to present back and forth.

By Ursula
at 2013-11-10T06:15

To be fair, your dad still supports you by paying alimony.

能幫我看看我的英文小作文嗎?? - 過年

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