獨立寫作思考方向的問題 @@ - 英檢

Caroline · 2008-11-26

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題目:選課是為了興趣還是職前準備~

前提:
我的心態...之前有準備過相關於"工作"的topic~

所以內容這樣寫:
選課是為了職前準備...因為1.好的工作帶給我們安定的生活 2.好工作實現我們的夢想.
為了找到好工作所以要選課為了職前準備~

我這樣思考方式有跑題嗎?

thx

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All Comments

Ingrid2008-11-28

很好啊..

Kristin2008-12-02

跑題:you should focus on the interrelation between take

Charlotte2008-12-06

course and career preparation,not state the benefits of

Hazel2008-12-06

great job. Hoping this suggestion is useful. : )

Thomas2008-12-09

For example, you can develop supportive statements like

William2008-12-13

1.taking English course increase the competence of

Gary2008-12-13

entering foreign companies.

Tom2008-12-17

2.taking ''Globalization understanding course'' makes

Emma2008-12-18

people becoming generalist and that really benefits me

Linda2008-12-19

(or 'my career as businessman.',or other jobs you like)

George2008-12-23

- Please feel free to correct me.