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一向以來，送佛公開課都是扎扎實實的帶著現場同學實際演練托福考題，
現在，讓我們跟著老師寫作的步驟，一起來認識托福寫作!!

1. **審題
題目: If you had to work on a project for school would you rather:
1) work alone, 2) work with classmates or 3) work with a tutor.
假設我們立場選了(2) work with classmates

2. **Brain Storming ＝＞發想內容的ideas
因為題目是以If you.....，我們自然以<自己>來開始
可以想自己的個性，可以想自己學習經驗及效果，
可以想自己work with classmates的好處。

假設第一個句子的想法是從個性開始:
Firstly, because I was very shy, so if I work on a project with other
classmates, I feel safe and have more confidence.

3. ** 將Ideas 修飾美化一下，寫成了段落第一句 - 主題句
First of all, teamwork has helped a sensitive student like me to overcome my
fears and learn how to develop a high level of confidence.

4.** 想個自身的example 來支持主題句，為何teamwork overcome fears and gain
confidence.
ex:
When I was in my teens, I was too timid and vulnerable to interact properly
with other classmates.Not until a teacher assigned a group project and
encouraged me to work proactively with other peers did I start to conquer
my interaction anxiety and be involved actively in discussions.
Through cooperating with classmates on school projects, I’ve realized the
importance of teamwork. The more I participate in team discussions and
contribute ideas, the more confident I become.
Therefore, I appreciate every opportunity to work with classmates on a team
project, as this is the best chance for me to bring my strengths to the table.
這樣的步驟(3) +(4)我們至少要寫出兩到三段，稱之為body paragraphs來支持我們選擇
work with classmates 這個立場

5. **conclusion 結尾段 =>最後一段，將我們上述的2-3個主題句再改寫一下，
成為最後的結論

依照這五個步驟，我們就完成了一篇英文作文了。
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