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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People behave
differently when they wear different clothes. Do you agree that different
clothes influence the way people behave? Use special examples to support your
answer.

All we have to wear clothes everyday. Many people wear different clothes
each day. And, we usually dress differently in differnt situations.
Personally, I believe that people' behavior change while they are in
different clothes.

First of all, we behave differently due to the special charactoristic of a
clothe. Some clothes allow people do things elegently and some clothes let
people do things easily. For example, while I am in a sports clothe, I walk
faster and I am willing to do things require more power, such as movine some
heavy things, because the clothe is lighter and make it easy for me to move
my body. There are different propose for those clothes.

Furthermore, we have different behaviors owing to the value of clothes. If I
buy a expensive clothe, I will definitly behave carefully when I wear it
because I don't want to split it or make it dirty. On the other hand, if I am
in a cheap clothe, which I don't really treasure , I will do things more
casually. For instance, when I wear a Hang Ten T-shirt , I play basketball or
go jogging. Nevertheless, when I wear a Rageblue suit, I will go to library
or have dinner with friends only.

Last but not least, we behave differently because the clothe sometimes means
some thing to us. Take myself for examply, the suit of my senior high school
reminds me to be a diligent student and everyone prespect me ,too. Hence, I
always force myself contrate and study hard when I am in my suit and
studying in a library. I am prode of this clothe.

In conclusion, based on the statements above, I agree with the statement
that clothes influence the way people behave.

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