寫給媽媽的英文信...請幫我翻譯和糾正錯誤!! - 健康

By George
at 2008-04-25T00:00

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母親節我打算寫一封英文信給媽媽!!
不過我的英文不是太好.....
內容是我自己寫的+奇摩知識上找來的+譯典通...ㄎㄎ!!
我想請英文高手幫我看看我的信是否通順...還有幫我修改我破爛的英文文法= =
謝謝嘍~~~感激不盡!!
今天是一個特別的日子,我想對你說些我內心深處的真心話...謝謝你辛苦的為了這個家付出了這麼多,你做的一切...(接下來的這三句我不知道該怎麼寫!!請幫幫我>"<)...我和妹妹都看在眼裡,感激在心裡!當然也很心疼你為了我們這麼辛苦!
Today is a special day,I really wanna to tell you some true words from my cockles of the heart...thank you for you hard to pay so much in order to this family,everything you have done .........
大家都說認真的女人最美麗.因此,我認為最美麗的女人就是媽媽!!我總是想著我的這一生怎麼這麼幸運能擁有你!
謝謝你照顧我即使你的工作很忙.有時候我心情不好,我會對你大吼大叫但你卻沒有這樣對我.相反的,你安撫我.你的愛讓我好感動!我想告訴你我真的愛你!!
Everybody is saying that the most earnest woman is the most beautiful.Therefore,I think that the most beautiful woman is mom!! I always think that how can I be so lucky to have you in my life!
Thank you for taking caring of me even when you are busy.Sometimes when I in a bad mood,I'll yell at you but you didn't yell back to me.Instead,you comfort me.Your love make me feel touched! I want to tell that I really love you!!
妳是世界上最棒的媽媽.我們是如此幸運能夠作你的小孩而且從今天起我會成為一個更好的女兒.我也會永遠照顧你和保護你.
祝福你永遠健康又美麗!
You are the greatest mom in the world.We are so lucky to be your children and i will be a better daughter from now on.Also, i'll take care of you and protect you forever and ever.
I wish u healthy and beautiful forever!
我的英文真的很破吧= =而且我很多都是查奇摩知識的...
另外請問最後一句"祝福你永遠健康又美麗"的祝福應該是用wish嗎?我怎麼記得老師好像說過wish是用在比較不可能實現的願望上= ="...或者是最後一句祝福的話能幫我想想能不能用更好的句子詮釋呢?!!?
麻煩英文高手了!!
再次感謝你~~~~~!!!!!

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By Emma
at 2008-04-25T09:36

Dear Mom,
Today is a special day, and I want to tell you something from
bottom of my heart. I know everybody says it about their mother,
but you really are the best one in the entire world. I am how I am
now because of you. When I was growing up, you gave me
everything and have always been so proud of me. I love you and
thank you for all that you have done for us."
Thank you for taking great caring of me even when you are busy. I
remember, when i was in a bad mood, and I yelled at you. At that
time, you comforted me in stead of being mad at me.
Because of that, I felt so touched. Mom...I love you, forever!!
I want to write this and let you know that as my Mama, I want
to wish you the BEST Mother's Day EVER, and I wish you remain
healthy and beautiful everyday. As a daugher, no matter what,
I will take great care of you, and protect you.
Happy mother's day!
Love you,
(Your Name)
2008-04-25 12:23:00 補充：
correction: Thank you for taking great CARE of me....(it's not caring..mistyped..sorry)
2008-04-25 12:26:59 補充：
Correction:I will take great care of you and protect you... (NO comma after and)

By Quanna
at 2008-04-25T22:58

今天是一個特別的日子,
Today is a special day,
我想對你說些我內心深處的真心話...
I would like to tell you some sincere words from my kindly heart…
謝謝你辛苦的為了這個家付出了這麼多,
I am really grateful for you were expending so much on this family,
你做的一切......
Every single thing that you have done…
我和妹妹都看在眼裡,
I and my sister were just putting the thing that you have done to us in our heart,
感激在心裡!
We felt indebted in our mind.
當然也很心疼你為了我們這麼辛苦!
Certainly, we felt so sorry about that you were laborious on us!
大家都說認真的女人最美麗.
Everybody says that {the most beautiful woman is those who works hardest}.
因此,我認為最美麗的女人就是媽媽!!
Therefore, I believed that the most beautiful woman is my mom.
我總是想著我的這一生怎麼這麼幸運能擁有你!
I always feel so cheerful about how lucky I could have you in my life.
謝謝你照顧我即使你的工作很忙.
I feel thankful of you always take care of me, even when you are busy on your work.
有時候我心情不好,
When I was in the angry mood,
我會對你大吼大叫但你卻沒有這樣對我.
Sometimes I would yell at you but you never did to me, ever.
相反的,你安撫我.
On the contrary, you comforted me.
你的愛讓我好感動!
Your love makes me so gratitude.
我想告訴你我真的愛你!!
I just want to tell you that I myself awfully love you.
妳是世界上最棒的媽媽.
You are the greatest mom in the world,
我們是如此幸運能夠作你的小孩而且從今天起我會成為一個更好的女兒.
We felt so lucky to be your children and I am going to be a better and have a well behaved from now on.
我也會永遠照顧你和保護你.
By the way, I’ll take care of you and protect you forever.
祝福你永遠健康又美麗!
I sincere wish that you have a healthy body and beautiful forever and ever.
還有繼續............ 下面
2008-04-26 19:21:03 補充：
參考文章評:
看得出來你平常有在讀書啦~你其實文法部分不錯,但是小細節你就沒有注意到了,寫文章時要把你在說的事情用同樣的式,像是你要說你媽媽之前所辛酸做的事,你就必須都用過去式,再來你的願望才用未來喔! 到時候你真的寫一篇英文故事你就知道了.
還有繼續............ 下面
2008-04-26 19:21:36 補充：
Wish是祝福的, 希望實現的,大家都這樣用. 其實只要你perfer 的用法你就寫了. 這些也是個願望而以,包括wish, hope, expect, want, desire和 aspiration.你選一個吧!另外- Wanna 這個字是縮寫於{want to},所以不要再加一個to~
還有繼續............ 下面
2008-04-26 19:22:01 補充：
還有阿,我們常會把一個同樣的事情寫完才打句點,但是在逗點後一樣是要一個整的句子,就是說一定要有主詞+動詞+名詞,你有時沒用主詞ㄟ~ 其實在寫一篇文章時最重要,通通要用正式的和完整詞語,不能太口語化喔!!!! 加油吧~你英文會更強的.
還有繼續............ 下面
2008-04-26 19:22:56 補充：
樓上外國20年的,是真的嗎????? 英文有點………(有很多種說法)
2008-04-26 19:28:19 補充：
對不起,想要把它寫成一段英文only的,你看了話比較容易,但是字數都太多,你能把它貼到word裡,然後把所有的中文刪了,絕對okay的,希望你能滿意~

By Yuri
at 2008-04-28T00:31

這樣可以嗎?
今天是一個特別的日子,我想對你說些我內心深處的真心話...謝謝你辛苦的為了這個家付出了這麼多,你做的一切...(接下來的這三句我不知道該怎麼寫!!請幫幫我>"<)...我和妹妹都看在眼裡,感激在心裡!當然也很心疼你為了我們這麼辛苦!
It's a special day today; I would like to tell you something from the bottom of my heart. Thank you for doing so much for our family, sister and I really appreciate it deeply even though we are reluctant to see you sacrificing so much for us!
大家都說認真的女人最美麗.因此,我認為最美麗的女人就是媽媽!!我總是想著我的這一生怎麼這麼幸運能擁有你!
謝謝你照顧我即使你的工作很忙.有時候我心情不好,我會對你大吼大叫但你卻沒有這樣對我.相反的,你安撫我.你的愛讓我好感動!我想告訴你我真的愛你!!
There is a saying about "The most beautiful women are those who that work hard." I think you are one of them. I am always grateful to be so lucky to have you as my mom.
Thank you for taking caring of me even when you are busy. Sometimes when I am in a bad mood, I'll always yell at you, but instead, you comforted me and try to calm me down. I am so touched by your love; I want to let you know that how much I love you!
妳是世界上最棒的媽媽.我們是如此幸運能夠作你的小孩而且從今天起我會成為一個更好的女兒.我也會永遠照顧你和保護你.
祝福你永遠健康又美麗!
You are the greatest mom in the world, we are so lucky to be your children. From today on, I will be a better daughter, and I will always take care of you and protect you. Wishing you stay healthy and beautiful! : )
2008-04-25 06:49:02 補充：
Wish 只是你的祝福, 但用法並沒錯. Wish 代表妳希望實現的事; 但沒有人可以預測未來; 不表示它是不可能發生的.

By Todd Johnson
at 2008-04-25T05:12

First, you're writing a letter not an e-mail. "我" have to be "I". "你" have to be "you" can't be "u".
The last sentence will be "Wish you healthy and beautiful forever!" You don't have to put "I" before verb for this kind of sentence.
There's more need to be fixed. Like : "I really want to tell you something truly from the bottom of my heart." will be better than the way you wrote. Maybe after more practice you'll write better. Please keep on working. You'll be there.

By Lauren
at 2008-04-26T03:45

Today is a special day,I really wanna to tell you some true words from my cockles of the heart...thank you for you hard to pay so much in order to this family,everything you have done .........
建議你把　wonna 改成　want to

寫給媽媽的英文信...請幫我翻譯和糾正錯誤!! - 健康

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