口說1模版+建立資料庫 - 英檢

現在在嘗試做口說1,2的模版，還有建立xination大大所謂的database
類似他所謂的McDonland's Theory，我打算focus在台灣跟城市
然後以travel，food貫穿，以下是我試做的example

Q: what is the most impressive experience you have?

There are a number of events I can recall. At the moment, the most
impressive one that comes to mind is [the trip of Keelung in Taiwan].
First of all, [Keelung is a maritime city so the seafood is incredible
fresh]. [I particularly love the salmon sashimi. When I ate the very fresh
raw fish slice, it melted in my mouth. I couldn't forget it!]
In addition, [Keelung night market is one of the most famous night markets.]
[Night market is a very special culture in the country. Keelung night
market serves almost every traditional Taiwanese cuisine(food). The most
important thing is they are all delicious, especially Stincky tofu. The
strong flavor and crispy taste are extemely charming.]

[]是拿來代換的地方

可以幫我看看這個範例有沒有哪裡不好, vocabulary, grammar, structure
organization, logic, specific or not

這個延伸出去預計涵括personal, place, media (partly)

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