看到出分 我的寫作分數慘不忍睹
整合應該是聽力漏聽太多
不過獨立也只能到Fair
那天獨立題目是
After completing high school, students should at least a
year off work or travel before begin university.
我的寫法是
agree開頭段+兩段論點+結尾
論點分別是
1.students could learn more experience and culture from others countries.
2.students could afford tuition and cost of life with full-time work.
不曉得這樣寫還能怎樣改進?
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整合應該是聽力漏聽太多
不過獨立也只能到Fair
那天獨立題目是
After completing high school, students should at least a
year off work or travel before begin university.
我的寫法是
agree開頭段+兩段論點+結尾
論點分別是
1.students could learn more experience and culture from others countries.
2.students could afford tuition and cost of life with full-time work.
不曉得這樣寫還能怎樣改進?
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