12.6進步18分心得(作文部分) - 英檢

本來想連同口說的部分一起分享
只是口說的部分怎麼寫都覺得寫得不好
再加上我的口說只有24，和版上幾位口說考26 29 30的比起來
我的心得大概不夠值得參考，就讓我省略掉它吧(逃走)

這次這篇除了分享我的作文準備方式和技巧
也一併附上我透過這些技巧逐步演進的作文，給各位參考

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最初，我和板上的各位一樣，是極度逃避作文的
因為，閱讀考不好，可以掰說是自己眼睛不舒服
聽力考不好，可以說是耳朵一時漏聽內容
口說說不好，可以辯稱是聲帶打結(?)
但是作文寫不好，卻沒有理由可以牽拖

畢竟，總不能說作文沒寫好，是因為沒有把腦袋帶出來吧XD

是的，作文是個殘酷的科目
隨著你一筆一筆key in文字，你的用詞技巧，文法，邏輯，英文程度，通通一目了然
連想遮掩一下也作不到，因為你寫出來的作文，就反應了你的程度
這不但騙不了別人，也騙不了自己，所以我和大家一樣，一開始，是極度不想寫作文的


就連我9月28要考試，考試前兩周，我還是不肯動筆寫作文
直到考試前一周又一天，寰宇的willis老師在課堂上半恐嚇的說
"你們是要考試的人，作文不練習，怎麼行呢"
"如果作文寫不好，模版又不趕快練熟，要怎麼考試呢"
這幾句話把我給硬生生打醒，我回到家，馬上開始刻模版
下面是我最初刻出來的模版，和搭配這個模版寫出來的範文

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模版

The topic of people’s view on something can be approached from several
different angles due to its complexity. Some people tend to prefer something
while others seem to prefer something. I have also developed my own point of
view as well. I prefer to something for two reasons.

The first reason that I prefer something is that answer.
For instance, sample.
The second reason is that I can answer.
For example, sample.
All of the reasons have influenced my opinion on this issue.

That’s not to say, of course, that other points of view are completely
without merit. However, I think the reasons I have provided in favor of my
point of view are stronger.
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範文

People have different ways of escaping the stress and difficulties of modern
life. Some read; some exercise; others work in their gardens. What do you think
are the best ways of reducing stress?

The topic of escaping the stress and difficulties of modern life can be
approached from several different angles due to its complexity. Some people
tend to prefer reading while others seem to prefer to work in their gardens. I
have also developed my own point of view as well. In my opinion, the best ways
to reduce stress of modern life are exercise and reading.

Firstly, exercise is really an effective way to overcome stress because it is
good for our health; and a healthy body improves our thinking. When a person
thinks more clearly, he has more ability to overcome stress. Thus exercise is a
useful tool in stress reduction.

Secondly, reading also has a beneficial effect on individuals in stress
reduction. When reading a good book, a man can feel relief and reduce the focus
on his difficulties. Therefore, he may be able to have a break and store the
energy to overcome the difficulties. In some cases, a book contains jokes and
some interesting contents may work even better.

That’s not to say, of course, that other points of view are completely without
merit. However, I think the reasons I have provided in favor of my point of
view are stronger.
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因為腦袋抗拒寫作文，加上沒什麼練習
只能寫出這種東西XD
通篇210個字，內容貧乏，用字，文法也很粗糙
整篇給人的感覺只是在listing，沒有舉一個完整的事例
也沒有進一步詳述原因

9.28就要考試了
上面那篇範文是我9.25寫出來的東西
我對作文的絕望，各位可想而知XDXD

(待續)

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